Revision Plan

Revise:

1. I am going to work on the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs and make them make more sense and flow together better.
2. I am going to give the reader background information so that they understand what ADD is. 
3. I am going to expand my conclusion and make it more of an argument. 

Edit:

1. I am going to put commas and use the fanboys rule in every part of my paper.
2. Spelling needs to be double checked
3. Work on an ending sentence that really leaves the reader amazed.